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The other day, I had an interesting conversation with a friend of mine about the pros and cons of Facebook. About halfway through the conversation, he asked me how many Facebook friends I have, to which I replied, “A couple hundred.”.

He scoffed and smugly told me that he had over two thousand. At first, a part of me was ashamed. In this social media generation that we live in, I thought it would be nice to have that many network friends. Who wouldn’t, right?

Quietly, I told him that that most of my friends on Facebook are my mother, brothers, and sisters that I have known and loved all my life. My cousins, aunts, and uncles that even though many miles separate us we are still as close as when we were children laughing and playing together. Friends that I went to middle school with, first loves and high school sweethearts that will always have a special place in my heart.

Pastors, preachers, and men of God I have sat under and served our Lord with are also a part of that list. Their wives and children and my extended church family, I have regular conversations with, still picking on each other from time to time.

Over the years, we have shared so many wonderful events in our lives. Together we shed tears of happiness for one another as we celebrated, cheering each other on and tears of sorrow as we poured out love and prayers in times of heartache.

To my amazement, he stood silent for a moment, then apologized to me. His words were sincere when he said that he could not say the same. “Your Facebook friends are far greater than if I had a hundred thousand.”

We had a good laugh together, then went right into a conversation about who was the better president. You can imagine that went well.

Picking Your Genre

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One of the most popular questions I get from aspiring Christian fiction writers is “How do I choose my genre?”

Genre fiction is also known as popular fiction or literature created from the imagination. This is different than non-fiction which simply put is literature based on fact.

When choosing your genre, You are focusing your writing on what you are you going to write about.

This is a list of basic overall genres to choose from in order of most popular.

  1. Romance
  2. Crime/ Mystery
  3. Religious/Inspirational
  4. Sci Fi/Fantasy
  5. Horror
  6. Action/Adventure
  7. Comedy

I know what a lot of you may be thinking. How can you write Christian fiction with these genres? Some of these genres go against what I have been taught and believe.

It is this type of thinking that answers the question, why are there not more Christian fiction on the book shelf?

A couple of quick comments on this subject I hope will put your mind at ease.

  1. Remember rule one: Always put God first, give him the glory. Spend time in prayer asking God’s direction if you haven’t already chosen a genre. Take the time to talk to God about what you want to write about. Let the Spirit of God give you the direction you need.

 

  1. There is already great Christian fiction written by Godly men and women with all these genres available. They have forged the path for you to follow on. Grab God by his hand tight and let Him lead you down that path.

 

  1. It is not what you can do for God but what God can do through you. If God has led you to write, then why do you resist? Understand that there is a need for good quality Christian fiction. You may be the one that God is looking for to fill that void.

 

  1. Ask yourself what you like to read. Chances are if you like to read a good mystery or crime book, then you will enjoy writing them to. If you like Science Fiction or Romance write Science Fiction and Romance.

Have fun with your genre of choice. Start thinking about what would be a good story.

As you think on this, look for spiritual inspirations through music, scripture, a sunset or sunrise. Allow the Spirit of God to influence your thoughts at the inception or beginning of your story and allow Him to permeate it through out.

This will separate your story from the rest of the pack out there and will be the foundation for everything you write.

Keep in mind that Christian fiction is not writing for the masses at large, but presenting your story to a smaller select group of readers, Christians.

For more information on Writing Christian Fiction, Check out my YouTube channel, Christian Youth Fiction or Apple Blossoms Book Series on Facebook.

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Applesauce: Updating Apple Blossoms

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Good Monday morning everyone. I hope everyone had a wonderful weekend.

Everyone here had an exciting weekend. Fellowship with family and friends, and a blessed communion service at Crossroads Fellowship was the highlight of my weekend.

God is good. He continues to bless here as I continue forward with my writing endeavors. I have received my first shipment of author copies of Apple Blossoms and have been preparing for the hard task of marketing my first book.

God is great. I have contacted a local Christian gift store Fully Armored, here in Aiken about selling my book in their store. After a wonderful time of fellowship with the owners Samuel and Katrina, they were almost as excited as I was at the potential partnership between us. Tuesday I will present them with a free copy of the book for consideration to place on their bookshelf for sale, and yes, a book signing.

God is glory. Please be in prayer for both myself and for Fully Armored Christian Gift shop and may the glory of God shine through in everything we do.

Applesauce: Updating Apple Blossoms

Apple Blossoms is constantly changing as it evolves into the book that will one day be published. Covers, characters, and story lines are only a few examples. Now, stronger plot lines will be added to the list.
After very encouraging words from Nancy Lohr, senior editor of Journey Forth Publications (http://www.bjupress.com/books/journeyforth/), and much needed direction from Andrew Toy, editor and co-owner of Endever Publishing (https://adoptingjames.wordpress.com/2016/02/09/3-ways-endever-will-differ-from-other-publishers/), I believe we are ready for the final rewrite and edit.
Several beta readers have written their reviews and Apple Blossoms is getting high marks all around. I would like to personally thank each of you for your contributions to this youth book series.
Our team here is pushing hard to get this book ready for the Carolina Christians Writers Conference (http://www.fbs.org/ministries/special-events/carolina-christian-writers-conference/) in Spartanburg, South Carolina next month. While we are there, we will sit down with Nancy Lohr and several other publishers for some one-on-one face time. If you have never attended a conference for Christian writers, I highly recommend this one for you.
Please keep us in your prayers as we get closer and closer to publication.
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APPLESAUCE: UPDATING APPLE BLOSSOMS

I would like to take the opportunity to thank everyone for their response to our Facebook launch for Apple Blossoms earlier this month (https://www.facebook.com/AppleBlossomsBookSeries/). If you haven’t seen it yet, check it out for cool stuff about this book series. 

Collectively, there were some changes made to the title. Because this will be a series, the decision was made to give each book a one word name instead of a long or catchy title. This way, young readers will readily identify the overall theme of each book. Instead of the original name Casting Seeds, the first book will now be called Sacrifice. Tentatively, the second book is Fear and the third is Temptation. I will give you three guesses as to what each book is about.

Upon request, I recently submitted a full proposal  for prayerful consideration to Nancy Lohr, Senior Editor of JourneyForth Publications of Bobby Jones University. I am now waiting for her response. In March there will be a Christian writer’s conference in Spartanburg, South Carolina, where I will be having brief meetings with her and several other potential publishers. (http://www.fbs.org/ministries/special-events/carolina-christian-writers-conference/)

If you have been following this blog, you know I strongly advocate the use of editors. Apple Blossoms: Sacrifice has had a first round edit/rewrite to correct spelling and grammar flaws and overall plot/character corrections (read https://projectappleblossomsblog.wordpress.com/2015/02/11/survived-the-first-round-edit/). Second and third round edits were professionally done by WordPress’s own Rochelle Deans (https://rochelledeans.wordpress.com/). A heart felt thank you, Rochelle, for everything. These edits were followed by more rewrites that included point of view, character development and plot flow among other things. (read https://projectappleblossomsblog.wordpress.com/2015/03/05/second-round-edit/). 

Thank you to all the Beta readers. I am looking forward to your comments and reviews. If interested in Beta reading this book, let me know by messaging me on this site or at nadlor@live.com or johnnyrayturner64@gmail.com.

I know this is a lot of blah, blah, blah but, if you’re still with me, I want to shout out to Andrew Toy (https://adoptingjames.wordpress.com/) for being brave enough to do the final proofread of this book. Andrew is an author/writer/editor for youth and young adult fiction here on WordPress and I look forward to working with him on this project. 

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A stuttering W…W…What?

While children today face a myriad of obstacles growing up, I can’t help but think they sometimes have it easy compared to the obstacles  adults faced when we were children. One of the biggest challenges both share is being picked on by those around us. Friends and foes it seemed never hesitated to jump at the opportunity to humiliate us in front of our peers whether in harm or jest.

As a child I had a stuttering problem. The letter W was the worst. Silly as it may sound, it wasn’t long before everyone around me got into the action of asking me, “Hey Johnny, guess what?” Of course, lacking any common sense my reply would be, “W…W…What?” Too late, everyone was already laughing. The automatic response from the beast child that asked me the question would always be, “You got five minutes to get rid of that word.” Terrified that I would forever be stuck with that word, I would frantically run from one student to the next desperately asking them, “Hey you, guess w…w…what?” Much to my demise, everyone in my first grade elementary school class had more common sense than me.

I am sure you have heard of the old saying, “Write what you know.” When faced with the challenge of bringing a character to life and making them more real, writers can and should delve into their own past and personal experiences.

Remember the first time you ever rode a bike, your first real fight and who could forget the emotional rollercoaster ride of their first kiss. How did you feel? What were you thinking. What else was going on around you. As a writer you want to connect with your reader on an emotional basis so that they buy into your character. One way to do this is to bring these precious insights to your writing and as you do, your reader will draw from their own personal experiences and really connect with your character.

As your character experiences things physically, emotionally and even spiritually, let your reader be a part of that experience. When your character is mad or sad let the reader get mad or sad. One of the greatest compliments an author can have is when someone approaches them and tells them how much they can’t stand the way the villain in the story made them angry or how the hero made them cry during an emotional moment. This is a reader that is fully committed to your characters. Keep in mind that like anything else, this can easily be over done and should be used like seasoning, sprinkled lightly to taste.

 

 

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A New Year, A New Book

 

With a new year now upon us, many may have made a new years resolution to start that book you have been wanting to write for some time now or finish the one you have already been working on. This may be easier said than done. As writers our lives are filled with constant endeavors with interruptions that many times interfere with our main goal and that is to write. What is an aspiring author to do?

I do have a great deal of respect for those individuals that can meticulously organize and plan out every minute of each day to a set and ridged schedule. For some individuals, this may not be a choice and is the only means in which they  can hope to get anything accomplished on a regular basis. However; I have never been a huge fan of set schedules or ridged dead lines. Over time I have leaned more to the school of thought for  task scribbled on a note card of things I would hope to see accomplished over a not so given amount of time.

You may be familiar with the organized daily and hourly planner where you write out 6:00 wake up, 6:05 make coffee, 6:10 shower … But what if that doesn’t work for you? What if  you  are the kind of person like me, that sees things differently than most? You know if you walk to the beat of a different drummer or think outside the normal box. You know who you are and although these suggestions may seem unconventional, I hope they will help you along your literary path.

SET GOAL

Goal setting is a very important first step. On a napkin, scratch sheet of paper or like me on a note card write down a overall goal of what you hope to accomplish. This seems to work well with everyone and is simple enough. Remember to keep it simple. It could read just : Write or finish book, article or repairs to living room immediately followed by some time…this week, this month, or this year. Give yourself plenty of time or less if you really feel like challenging yourself. Take a deep breath. Now that you have written it down you are on your way.

PRIME TIME

This is really the hardest part and where most individuals go horribly wrong. Everyone is different in the sense that there are times throughout the day that you may feel more alert or energetic. You know yourself better than others do and know if you are a night person or a morning person. If it takes more than two cups of coffee, a cold shower and a swift slap across the face to get you going out the door in the morning than it would be safe to say you are not a morning person and should leave the five minutes you gave yourself to roll out the bed and into you day alone. When are you most alert? Full of energy? Ready to create and inspire? That should be your target time. For me it is between the hours of 10:00am-8:00 pm. By ten o’clock at night its lights out and bed time for this sleepy old bear. You may be a night owl and your best alert time may be after midnight. Find that block of four to eight hours in the day when you feel primed.

FIND TIME

Again take the common sense approach here. Throughout the day and throughout the week, there will be times when this will be easy and on other days impossible. If you are one of those individuals who can plan between the hours of 10:00 am and 2:00 pm every day to sit in a Starbucks and write solid while sipping on a latte then God bless you. If you are not that person and you have two children in diapers, buried in paperwork or a fourteen hour a day work schedule, God bless you as well. What were looking for here is a sense of a general timeframe, in which all things considered, to try very hard to sit down to a pencil and a piece of paper on a regular basis. (Wow, was that a sentence run on or what). On some days you may not write anything while on others the planets align and you can somehow write uninterrupted for hours. Take it when you can and don’t fret about it when you can’t. Do what you can, when you can.

CHOOSE YOUR POISON

Whether you choose a typewriter or pc, a laptop or a legal pad, whichever you feel most comfortable with sit down to it with your favorite beverage or comfort food. I know this goes against everything you have ever been taught and truth be told I can’t tell you how many times I have had to wipe peanut butter and jelly or spilled milk off of my keyboard. I’m going to let you in on a little secret. I really enjoy and look forward to my time writing. I try that much harder to find that time to write just knowing that Peter Pan super crunchy peanut butter and Smucker’s grape jelly on mixed wheat bread is calling my name and waiting for me at my pc. Make your writing time as pleasurable as you can. It may be a laptop laying on the couch watching a episode of Greys Anatomy on Netflix or in an office on your multiple levered office chair where you find you are most comfortable. Coffee or coco, chips or vegetables, donuts or bagels…whatever works for you.

WRITER’S CRAMP…ERR..BLOCK

There is an old saying that you write when inspired and edit when your not. I say write like a madman when you can and turn up the volume to your headphones, surf the net, read your favorite Facebook page and watch plenty of anime when you can’t. Whatever you find that inspires you get plenty of it. Read other authors, look at art or go for a scenic walk. Inspiration can hit you at any time. When it does just jot it down in a note pad or scratch sheet of paper. That Burger King wrapper will due just fine for now. Or you could like me use your phone to text or email yourself. Hit the button that records your voice and writes it down for you. Save or send it to yourself not your mother. Been there and done that, then pull it up later while you are in your comfort zone. Many authors have written about a romantic walk on a beach, but only you can write it from your perspective.

BE VIGILANT

Writing should never be a chore. If you don’t feel like it, then don’t do it. Just keep the mind set that you will make a conscious effort to write whenever you can. Remember your overall goal. So many times, we are discouraged and give up never pursuing that life fulfilling dream of being a writer. I hope with your New Year comes the resolution that you will pursue that dream with all your heart. Whether your goal is to become published or just finish that story that has always been hanging out in the back of your mind, I hope you will take at least some of the suggestions from this page and be steadfast in your endeavor. Now where did I put that sandwich?

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Final editing is done…or at least I think it is?

Apple Blossoms has survived its last major professional edit and I would like to personally thank everyone involved in this project. It has been a long and gruelling road down the editing path and is now near completion.

Cover art has been drawn out and decided on and we are now bouncing around some different ideas for title and book names.

January marked the launch of our Facebook page Apple Blossoms  and I welcome each of you to like the page for more about this book series.

The manuscript is now being tested with select beta readers and in return we are asking for comments and a review. If interested in Beta reading this work please email me Johnny Turner at

nadlor@live.com or johnnyrayturner64@gmail.com

Keep in mind that this is fictional Christian writing targeted to youth between the ages of nine to twelve years old and should not be treated any differently.

 

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Where to find an Agent or Publisher

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     Going into this weekend as my wife and I packed our over night bags, she asked me if I was nervous. She was accompanying me to the Carolina Christian Writers Conference in Spartanburg, South Carolina.

I hoped to take workshops at the conference that would help me prepare my summary and manuscript enough to consider representing it to an agent for publication. I had already submitted a summary and first chapter for a 15 minute critique with a workshop teacher and expected professional feedback to help aid in this process.

I told her that I was not nervous because I did not know what to expect. I had already planned on this trip to be educational and was really looking forward to the workshops. We finished packing and drove to Spartanburg, enjoying the scenery and our time together.

While I may have expected some things as I had been in many conferences over my lifetime, I was not expecting what I found when I walked through the doors to the conference center. Several tables were set up as hundreds of people were congregated in the large forum outside the auditorium preparing for the conference to start.

My wife and I are not shy people so we made ourselves at home talking to others present in small chat before following the crowd into the auditorium for opening ceremonies. During this time around 25-30 Individuals were introduced as published authors, editors, agents and publishers that would be teaching the workshops and readily available for interviews.

I often wondered when the time came to search out an agent or where to find a publisher, how hard it would be. Contrary to popular belief, because of the declining economy, many publishers have removed in house editors and agents. They solely rely on already published authors and editors to be their agents and many come to the conferences for the sole purpose of finding a good story.

If you want to follow traditional publishing venues and want to find an agent or publisher, know that these writer conferences is where they are. They are looking for their next book to publish and you are looking to publish a book. It was easy to sit down and present Apple Blossoms to three different publishers while I was there. I had prepared my manuscript summary and had several copies on hand.

During the opening ceremony the speaker had told everyone gathered that if an agent or publisher is interested in your story they will let you know and if not, they will let you know why. I sat down with three of the markets biggest Christian publishers: Terry Kelly from Lighthouse of the Carolinas, Nancy Lohr of Journey Forth, and Larry Leech – editor and agent. Two of the three liked what they saw and asked for a full proposal with 3-5 sample chapters. The third liked what they saw but were only looking for YA and children’s picture books at this time.

Project Apple Blossoms has taken the next step on its road to publication and beginning April will be in the hands of Rochelle Deans, an editor from here at Word Press.  Once edited and rewritten, a full proposal will be submitted to two interested  publishers  for their consideration. I hope you will follow along on our progress and remember if you are looking for an agent or publisher…

…THEN SIGN UP FOR A WRITERS CONFERENCE!!!

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